The Story So Far

We have received a letter from Perth in Australia. We have a case on a missing person nicknamed Bubba, his real name is Matthew O' Sullivan he has been missing for five years his family has every police station in Australia so Spike Mulder's went to Bubba's original home England.

Recently we have had a parcel with pictures of Bubba's home in Perth. Bubba and Spike favorite place was the water tower last time Bubba went to the water tower he was never the same again. We found out that after a while he was doing anti social behavior. We went to Bubba's house and investigated the living room and the kitchen we found loads of thinks that helped us loads.

PLTS

I have achieved to begin to support conclusions, using reasoned arguments and evidence. we backed up are arguments with are evidence we retrieved. I did this throw questioning the suspects and backing it up with evidence I knew that dead leg did this because he had the black bag the witnesses saw and he drove a white escort
and he was wearing blue overalls that the witnesses commented.

I would like to in prove my punctuation and use of words I hope to achieve this in the next week.